Monday 29 June 2009

Collaborative Writing Activity between three countries


I would like you to click on the link below and read Miss Fiona's post in her blog about the stories you wrote collaboratively with South Africa and Canada. This is only one of the stories posted as an example.
I would also like you to leave a comment in her blog to this post. Be careful with your spelling and your tenses. I'm sure you can do it!

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale!!!
I wasn't able to leave a post in the South Africa kids blog,so I am going to comment here.
Well, I did enjoyed a lot reading and I really like the theme. Will the others olso appear in her wiki???
See you tomorrow at school,
GoodBye,Jose G.M 6A

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,

I think that the stories were great, the idea was excellent!!
I think that South Africa students did the main idea for Canada and us to finish it, but Canadians did a lot, I think that they made the whole story. My story was excellent, I like a lot the idea.
Well, I hope we can go tomorrow to school and they don't close it.

Good Bye,

Ramiro Sa.

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
It was fantiastic doing the Etherpas stories,
I allready put a comment in her blog
see you tomarrow
kisses
chiara f 6C

Beluu D said...

Hello Miss Ale,
I cant put a comment in any post of her blog. Why is it? I am going to send her a mail and ask her why it happens! I am going to try tommorow to do it!Becuase I really like and loove to comment in other blogs! I will put another comment sayning if I could!
Belen D

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
I wrote a comment, please ceck it!!AI think I is well hat I wrote.It was very good the blog of Fiona
Bye Nicolas 6c

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale, I read the story it was great!!! And there I commented. I think we have to go on doing storys with them, but also with more countries!!!
this is a good way to know people from other countries and we don´t have to meet them!
the blog is great...keep on posting
xxx
meli b

Anonymous said...

Miss Ale,
I really enojyed this project and I hope you and other children who we created this stories together, did so too! Bye
Delfina

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale!
After leaving a comment in your blog i will leave one in Fiona's blog... When i first saw Fiona's post i thought she had posted my story, because my story was also about a monster, but then when i started reading it i recongnized it wasn't mine! I liked a lot the story of the "Green Monster" but i LOVED mine that was very simmilar to that one... Well i hope we are able to see our finished stories fast, because i am very anxious to see the final product Ja Ja. I enjoyed a lot doing these collaborative stories with South Africa and Canada, i REALLY liked a lot there way of telling and their creativity. Next time i have to do a story i will focuss on the type of stories we wrote because i really liked the type of stoires!!!
xoxoxox
Maartuuuu.P

Anonymous said...

Hi miss ale,
this was very good to see because, this story was made by south african children, canada children and we making one story.
very good!
francisco

Anonymous said...

Miss Ale,
The stories were really great and not only de stories but the kind of project! The idea was also marvellous you are a very imaginative and creative teacher. I would like to continue doing more and more stories on etherpad and I would like to tell everybody about this project to tell you them to do it. I enjoyed a lot communicating with people through a blog, that is great and thanks to our bloog. CLAPP because we couldn't do nothing at all so blog you roockk! I am glad that Fiona liked and enjoyed this project and the other students too. I am waiting and checking every single day Fiona's blog to see if my story appears so I will check well!Thanks too: Mr. Blog that is the best and to Mrs. Creative and Imaginative girl which the title and Miss Ale won the price that is we will behave in an EXCELLENT way, well, I promise myself!
Kisses & Hugs
Keep on Posting and Lots of love
From Cata

Anonymous said...

Hi miss ale,
how are you? I think is very early, but I couldnt leave a day without commenting in a post!
I tried to comment on the blogg of the students of South Africa. I liked very much doing this story and with 3 nations,and I think the students of Canada and South Africa also. And the exmple with the program on the post of their blogg was great!!!
See you on shcool
bye bye
tomas j

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale!!!
I wasn't able to leave a post in the South Africa kids blog. It sais "la pagina expiro"
bye
federico j

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale:
I enetered the blog of south africa,and it was very good!!!!
I read the story and I wondered through the blog, I saw all the posts of the first page, even if I didnt leave a comment on them. I saw the post of extranormal, that you had also put and now Im triyng to do one, I think it will be fun. I think it was very good to do the stories with Canada and South Africa, it was a hole new experience, (well for me yes). The blog of the children of South Africa is different than ours, the posts that they put, the games, thevideos,etc. But they are both veeeeeery good. I think I am about to finish the extranormal video, but I couldnt put it in spanish so I put it in english. The site is very good.
See you tomorow (if the classes are not suspended)
byeeee
sofi 6c