Saturday, 10 April 2010

Next week...


By now you have read and listened to different mystery/detective stories. You have presented your story to an audience. It is your turn now to write your own mystery story. You will have to include all the necessary elements that make a story a mystery one: victims, witnesses, suspects, red herrings, crime, crime scene, clues, suspense, intrigue...
Rememeber that you have to plan your story carefully.
Let's be writers for a day!

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48 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi miss ale,

I think we already did a story with miss jessica. But however I would like to do another one. The one we did with miss jessica could be any story, it didnt have to be a mistery/detective story.

Marco S

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale
ahhh this i going to be difficult.......But if my imagination whants I can do ah good mystery detective story.
Bye francisco.gr6C

Miss Ale said...

Hello Marcos,
Did you write the story? or did you work on the story The Will?
See you!
Have a nice weekend!
Miss Ale

Anonymous said...

Hi Miss Ale..nice comment!
Wow it would be nice to try to put in practice all the things we learnt and plus our creativity and imagination!! Nice idea when we start....
see you kisses
Vale P.

Anonymous said...

Hi miss ale,


I think that is a great idea to make a detective story because we can improve our writing also I want to yous my brain to make some stories because I love making stories but it is very difficult.
Francisco.tambussi

Anonymous said...

hi miss ale
I love making misteries stories.
I think that you already noticied that. jaja
waiting...
sofi.k

carolina said...

Hello!!!!
Yeah!!!!
It is a great idea so we can develop our minds more. But it is quite difficult to create a mystery story because you have to think every second that you write the story, so you can write the right clues to find out who is the criminal.
Can we live in suspense who is the criminal and give option, as the story that we read with Miss Jessica when you were gone "The Unlucky Landlord" (I think).
Bye
Caro

Anonymous said...

I think that is a good idea. We already do one but it wasn't so good so I will like to do another one .
bye sofi f

Anonymous said...

Hi Miss Ale,
I do not like much to write stories but when they are aobut mystery I give all my effort to write a good story. I hope we write another mystery/detective storie.
Santi B

Anonymous said...

Hi miss Ale keep on posting there are wonder full your posts and very nice decorated bye bye
agos

Alina said...

Hi Miss Ale,
If my mind doesn't fail I think I already made the story with Jessica... I think my brain didn't worked well on the story... I should improve my storys next time.
I made the ending of the story of ``The Tickets´´.
I will keep looking for more interesting posts beyond.
Alina

Anonymous said...

Hi Miss Ale,
It is a great idea because I love writing stories and it is excellent to use what we have learnt to write a story but with our own ideas. Hope we all write great stories!!!!
See you tomorrow,

Axel G

Anonymous said...

HI MISS ALE, I THINK THE IDEA IS GREAT, I LIKE VERY MUCH WRITTING STORY'S
I WAS VERY NERVOUS TELLING MY STORY AT THE BEGINING BUT THEN I RELAX..
SEE YOU TOMOROW!
KISS
FLOR

Anonymous said...

hello miss ale,
thats good i think so...
well have a nice weekend and see yuo tomorow.
bye, justi

Anonymous said...

WOW MISS ALE I REMEBRE THE STORIE WE WRITE WITH MESS JESSICA
NOW WE HAVE TO BE WRITERS THAT’S A GREAT IDEA. I WOULD HAVE TO PLAN THE STORIE A LOTTTT!!!!!!
GOOD WEEKEND SEE YOU ON MONDAY.
MILAGROS S.G 6C BROWN

Anonymous said...

WOW MISS ALE I REMEBRE THE STORIE WE WRITE WITH MESS JESSICA
NOW WE HAVE TO BE WRITERS THAT’S A GREAT IDEA. I WOULD HAVE TO PLAN THE STORIE A LOTTTT!!!!!!
GOOD WEEKEND SEE YOU ON MONDAY.
MILAGROS S.G 6C BROWN

Anonymous said...

I think its a great idea to make a detective story.
I liked writting detective stories.
Its a bit difficult but great.
See you
Eugenio

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale
On friday we worked the ending of a story called the tickets it was very good the activity. We have to start planning the story on Monday?
When are we going to write it?
Nacho

Anonymous said...

hi miss ale
i want to write a mystery story i think is fun
vale g

gianfranco.zanier said...

Hi miss Ale,

its fun to do an other mistery story it wil be great.

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale

I have never written a mystery story but I think it will be fun. I hope it will improve my creativity!!

Pierre 6a

Anonymous said...

Yes miss Ale,
I am very happy of making a mystery/detective story and I have some ideas. The page you gave us had a lot of detail and had many small things that if I had to draw them I would stay for ever. The idea of righting a mystery/detective story is to learn how to creat suspense in all of our mystery/detective stories so that they have more intrige and to right better stories.

Andres J.
6a

Anonymous said...

Yes I thought that something we would do from the presentation.
I have a lot of Ideas to do a story and I like to write mistery and detective stories. Im going to enjoy doing it .
Mati 6c

Anonymous said...

I think it is a good idea becuase as we know now how a mystery story is formed and how it is like componed with different elements such as the crime the witnesses and all those things now we have to combine all that and write a mystery story. I always wanted to write a mystery story it is my favorite type of story.
bye
Fran.R

Anonymous said...

Yes we do this with Jessica and I liked very much to do it. Can we do some more?


JOSE

Anonymous said...

hello miss ale

i dink it was very good the dings you will have to use in the detective story but the image of the mystery it dont was very usful because i dink anotherdetective story . paablo6a

Anonymous said...

hello miss ale

i dink that the image of the detective story was no useful for me beacause i daught onther story but the things that you show as in the black bourd was very usful for me
pablo6a

Anonymous said...

Oh this will be very interesting writting a detective story but it will be difficult also



Facu V.

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale!

The story that we have done with Miss Jessica was great! and my ending that I have add was exiting (for me) I put a lot of action in only one paragraph..
My brain says that it was great and that I want to do another one and add an ending like the one of the three tickets that we did with Miss Jessica!
When I was reading the text I was already thinking what would had happen and how could I do the ending like Jessica said " do a super, exiting ending " , so that´s what I did..
If we do another of that type of text I would improve on my punctiation and to be careful with the tenses!
Whatever PLEASE if you have time you can do another one of lots of adventure and exiting scenes..

See you tomarrow in the School..
hugs and kisses.
Belu b. Fleming 6B

Anonymous said...

Hi Miss Ale
I think it is a great idea because we can improve our writing. Writing a mystery story for me is very dificult!!!! because you have to include many things, like clues, red harring etc...I will do my best to write a great story
Bye
Tomas.P

Anonymous said...

Hi miss ale

I really like reading detective storys now that i read one and saw some programs of detectives, i would love creat one
bye-bye
juanchi.C 6A

Anonymous said...

Mis Ale;

This is one of the tings I like to do, writting stories with mystery, detectives and spys. I will enjoy very much doing this work I like writting very much.

Melanie A 6A

Anonymous said...

i think that we can meke mor mystery and detective stories they are fun wen we plan them and some other things

vani.g

Anonymous said...

Miss Ale,
I think it is a good idea make a detective/mystery stroy because Im going to empruve the writing. I all ready know my story it is going to be grate.

Artu Elsztain 6c

Anonymous said...

Hy Miss Ale
We started it today and I have a great idea so I hope you like my story
Lots of Love
Vicky M

Anonymous said...

HEllo Miss Ale,
Do we need to write it, I know we are studing of that subject but if you could tell me are we going to do a project like with the book. If we do, I will start with it, just like with the TITANIC.
Kisses
Lucia Leporati6A

Anonymous said...

hi miss ale

Ithink it would be a great idea to put in practice our learnings with mystery and detectives story. Im allready thinkin what my story will be about
Bye Antonio

Anonymous said...

hi miss ale
i already started writing the mystery story and is very good although i have to finish it i like doing stories because the story always finishes as you wanted it to finish and whan you finish your story you always feel proud

Anonymous said...

vale g

Anonymous said...

Hi Miss Ale

When I am going to write the story I will put all my effort so I have fun and I think it will be very amuse.

PABLO 6B

Anonymous said...

Miss Ale,
I like to write stories and more some mystery with suspense and omisides stories. I have all my story in my mind and ill try to show it with the best vocabulary and rich ideas for you to understandmy plans. It talks about a police that has 9 knives he stole in a jewlery store. He killes rich people to steel them afterwords. Then Sherlok Bloms investigates and he has lots of red hearings. That is all.
Bye
Alejo N

Anonymous said...

hi miss ale I think I already have my story in mind. the other day I didnt know what to do but now I got an idea of something.
bye marina 6b

Anonymous said...

hello miss ale
I enjoyed a lot righting a mistery story.
I had a lot of ideas.
Hope we can do other stories.
Have a nice weekend.
BYE
TEO. A

Anonymous said...

Hi miss ale,
its a very creative idea because we can improved of making stories for our one and we can improved our writting.I like mistory and detective stories and im enjoying very much!
Bye
Lorenzo 6a

Anonymous said...

How fun I would enjoy a mystery detective story.


Nico F
6-B

Anonymous said...

Miss Ale, when are you going to give us our story?
I am very angooous!
Regards.. Sofi.b

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
It is a good idea to make another mistery and detective story. I would start to think on it.
Giovanni Rivalta

gianfranco.zanier said...

its was great!