Monday 16 November 2009

More on Persuasive Essays

This site from the BBC is to help you write persuasive essays.
Please have a look.
Enjoy it!


21 comments:

Anonymous said...

hi Miss Ale
I think this will be very usefull. Thanks this will help us when we are big I think. kepp on posting things like this. SEE you tomorrow
xoxo
martu r 6a

Anonymous said...

Hello miss Ale,
I like it a lot
I think tha is going to by very, very useful, I like it a lot
well see you tomorrow
chiara 6C

Anonymous said...

Hello miss Ale,
I put all my best thinking for this story. I coulnd't think much about the pictures.
Hope.
Martina.T 6A

Anonymous said...

Hello miss Ale,
I think is realy useful this video to help as understand better the persuasive essays. Besides it is very funny, so we learn throught funny things.
see you tomorrow
santi a

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,

The video is very good and very funny how they talk and do their movements.

See you tomorrow,

Ramiro Sa.

Anonymous said...

Thank you this is vbery usefull and is funny too . Very Creative.
Joaco R

Anonymous said...

Miss Ale,
this is a very usefl tool for us and also another person.
Juan G

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale!
I watched the video, its very interesting, it helps you understand a lot!
I didn´t realize that advicing, arguing and persuading could be so different. I knew that persuading meant trying to change the person´s thinking, but I didn´t know that when writing an argument you needed to consider both sides of the argument and that you could use counter arguments or connectives.
In the ones which you had to choose the best one, I got them all right, though I doubted a lot since in some of them I didn´t find something that helped me decide if it was eigther persuading, adivicing or arguing!
Nice post!
See you tomorrow
Jessi 6a

Anonymous said...

Miss Ale,
I loved the video it was very fun the way in which the woman talked. On the other hand I think that persuasive essays will be very useful for us in our future.
Lots of love
Delfi

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
I really enjoyed these page because I think that it is going to be very useful. Thank very much! I had to enter to the blog on Sunday so I could strudy for the writing process Exaam! Weel. thank you again adn see you now! Kisses Belu d

Anonymous said...

hello mis ale

the game was very fun and i think it will be a usefull tool to study

marc p 6a

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale, I think this post is a very usefull. I like it a lot.
Thank You


Santi.b.

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale, the Persuasive Essay was very good! This will help us a lot for the future! I liked a lot the persons that talked, they moved their heads!!!
It was fun!
the blog is great...keep on posting
xxx
meli b

Anonymous said...

I think its a good reason to post but, miss ale do you really think that a 7.70 is bad, Imean of course we have to improve ourselvs to be better,you know what, your right, maby in 6th grade, it can be a 7.70, but in 9th itcould be a 5.50, so Ibetter start inproving fast.

keep the good work,

lautaro.z

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale, thankyou for that very usful tips, we can use it for our writing when we write a persuasive essays in the future language classes.
grate post and thanks for the tips!!!


agustin.f

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss ALE,
thank you for putting this post because like i could not understand but now i now and understand.
Bye and thank you,

Agustina F.

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
This is very useful for the test it explains you about everything we've been studying. BYE.

Segundo 6C

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale
I didn't understand what the little people said but I like the images.
Mateo N.

Joaco said...

Hello Miss Ale,

I think that this page is great and very helpful, thanks a lot,

Joaquín S. 6ºB

Ceeli said...

Hello Miss Alee,
I think this site is very usefull, because as I was absent the day you explained it, I didn't had the chance to ask any questions to you. But I could handle myself with it. In the future this would be great help, for all of us. I would like start writing one of them, just to try. We will have lot's of fun! See you today or tomorrow. Lot's of love, Celi Peters

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
the site is very very good i liked it a lot and i learnd a lot to what a good idea.
luli
6c