Miss Ale,I think that what we have to bear in mind is to use proppor tenses becuase if not all the story will come up all mixed up with diffrent persons, even if it is first, second or third. I am really excited about starting to write our stories altough I did not understand at all what we have to do. I understood that the writer or you had to choose diffrent options you were given and make up a story, I think. Anyway I will ask you again. Well, see you tomorrowLots of loveDelfi 6B
hello miss ale I am really excited to start my fantasy story. I think is a nice thing to do. As Delfina said we have to bear in mind to use the tenses correctly.
Hi miss alee,I think the most important thing on writing a fantasy story is to remember in which person, (1st, 2nd or 3rd) you are writing, and another very important thing you have to bear in mind is in what tense you are writing in.(sory I couldn´t blog last week, I forgot to write it in my agenda...)a very big kisssofi b 6b
Hello Miis Ale the explanation of the first person and second person etc...Was MARVELLOUS but the thing is...I already new wich the persons were and how to use them. Though it was fantastic. At the beggining when you were explaning the story we had to make i was a little confused, because I thought that we had to write it in a paragraph all together. BUT THAT WOULD BE A MESS. I thought that that "web" u did was just to explain us. But luckily you showed us the wikis, and there I understood.Bye Miss AleAmalia.G 6A
Hello Miss Ale,I think that we have to bear in mind that we have to choose the write in wich we write it adn tehn the propper tenses. Like PAST, PRESENT OR FUTURE. The post was greaaaat!Belu d
Hi Ale, I am very exited of starting making Fantasy Storys.I am not the tipe of boy who writes excelent stories, but... I will try doing my best.Juan G6A
I'm sure you will Juan!
Hello miss ale, I think that the item that we need to bare in mind is that we have to write in second person... I can't wait to start writing our fantasy story, it will be very funny!!!!I hope that we do it well...!!!See youDomi
Hello Miss Ale,I think the idea of this project is excellent. The problem is that every member of my team is asking to be his partner of writing!See you tomorrow,Ramiro Sa.
Hello Miss Ale:Thank you for posting tips for our story to be better. I liked a lot the post and it helped me understand better what and how to express 1st, 2nd and 3rd person when writing. I like the new project that we are doing about writing a fantasy story with options, because I have one and I always thought that it would be very difficult to join all the writings so that they made sense but now that we are doing it, it is much easier than what I had thought before. It is a little bit difficult but not so much.See you tomorow!!!Bye sofi 6c
This anre all the things you told us today at school, but thank you for femejmbering me this.Mateo N.
Hello Miss AleI feel exited to do the project. I hope we do more projects like this!keep bloging!benjamin h
Hello Miss Ale, I am going to do all that things, I´m going to try to remember them. This helps us a lot to do the fantasy storie!the blog is great...keep on postingps: I liked a lot the photo of the three ghots!xxxmeli b
Hello Miss Ale,I think what wee have bear in mind is that for writing a fantasy story we need to know lots of things such as the ones you put on the post,thank yyyyyoooouuuu!!!!!!The thing I most liked about writing the story was that it was fun because it is in group and I think it will be fun, for what I saw of last year, and I always thought it would be very difficult to make a story that has many options because you have to join ideas and bear in mind that the ideas have to make sense, not like page 1 the princess shouted for the servants to come and page 6 (the one you had to go) the castle caught fire.Bye Miss Ale, see you in school,Agustina F.6c
Hello Miss Alee,I think that writting ffantasy stories are great! And even more if you have to write them as a group is even (más divertido) funner(?). We have already started writing our first paraghraph, and we all members of a group enjoyed it very much. Our fantasy story is abit lazy but it is good enough to make yo u laugh. This things we have to bear them in mind (as Delfi F. said), they are really important and if you get to remember ALL of them you get to write EXCELLENT sotires. I think it would be good to print them. What do you suggest me to do? Print this or not? Because when we use the laptops in school and in class we shoukd have some paper to guide us to have a final result of a GREAT FANTASY STORY!! One of the most important things we have to remember (in my opinion) is to write this fantasy story in SECONDD PERSON! I am anxiously waiting for tomorrow to start writting them... are we going to continue this project? Hope we willl.Thanks for making this post and thanks for making us remember this things. See you tomorrow,Hugs & KissesCeli Peters 6th B
Hello Miss AleWe have started to write the story and we have everything done. It is about a girl who is waiting for a friend in a road. Tthen a truck passes and suddenly his friend isnt more there and instead there is an elf.Then it continues.......Luki.R
Dear Miss Ale:I think that we have to bear in mind that we have to write in second person, and that we have to use the correct tenses.kissesvicky j m 6b
Hello Miss Ale, I think that what we have to bear in mind when we are writing our stories, is to write them in second person, you, you, so that the reader sees it in his or her point of view, and that we also have to write them on the present, so that the reader is involved in the story.Have a nice day,Joaco S. 6ºB
Hi miss ale,I THINK THE THINGS WE need to have in mind are the tipe of person you do the story. FIRST PERSON(I runned to the house)SECOND PERSON: You runned to the house) THIRD PERSON:he runned to the housetomas j
Hello Miss Ale I think that what we have to remember in our life is to use proppor tenses because if we do not use well the tenses we cant write a story either you cant write a /carta/. I didnt understood what is asking for ??Santi.b.
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