Tomorrow is our "collaborative writing day". You will be finishing off the stories started by Miss Fiona's students in South Africa and continued by Mr Millward's students in Canada. You will have to make good use of your time in class. This time I'll be there to help you and to share this collaborative activity together. I'll be taking some pictures while you work so that we can send them to our "virtual" friends in Cape Town and in Canada. Enjoy this piece of writing!!
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Hello Miss Ale
This will be great because 3 people will be making a story being on three different parts of the world.This was great because you can see their type of writing. It can be descriptive or not. On the story with the South Africans the child who made it with me was very creative and descriptive.
Luki.R
Hello Miss Ale,
Now we are doing it with students in Canada also! Woo! I really liked the idea of the "Collaboratin Wrinting" Or something like that! Becuase now first the Miss Fionas syudents in South Africa, then the students in Canada and then as! We are going to so it in pairs? Because as the final part is very short, or we are going to do it longer? Well, we are going to see how they write, if they are discriptional or if they arent. If how they trasmit htere information, what they like to write, and why. A lot of things we are going to now about our new VIRTUAL friends! Weell, the idea is great! Byee!
Beluu D!
Hello Miss Ale!
I am very excited to do this, because with Fiona it was much less challenging to do this. Because we could do what ever we wanted with the story, but now no, now we have to close the story a bit like it comes... It is also exciting because we are going to be able to know how Canadian persons, South African persons and Argentinian persons work together, and create a great story which will pass threw 3 different parts of the whole world!! Also when i saw the story of the South African's who started writing "our story" i could tell they were very creative, and that encourages me to see what is the result of the story, i hope that the Canadians are the same of creative as in South African's....
xoxoxo
Martuu.P
Hello Miss Ale,
I liked very much this activity because it was very creative. I also liked very much the way in which we comunicate with other people of other countries. I think that the period that you are going to give us is going to be very usefull because we can express our ideas better with the other group friends.
A big kiss ..
Mili F 6C
Hello Miss Ale,
I think it is going to be fun to to finish the stories, but also difficult and with more people.
Joaquin S. 6•B
helo miss ale
ejejej toomorow is the day yo´ve been talking about during a long when I say a long Is along time...... jejjejej I am very exited to do this with the Canada people ejjeje it is very exited...... Im having a lot of fun in school jejej bue......
BYE
Martin.P
Hello Miss Ale, thanks for giving us a chance to do the piece of writing for the students of South Africa. I couldn´t do it, because I didn´t have time, sorry. But I am going to take advantage of this it. I think that is incredible to finish storys from other persons of far away and with tegnology, before the children coulnd´t do that things, because they didn´t had tegnology. So we have to enjoy it very much!
the blog is great...keep on posting
ps: happy father´s day!!!
xxx
meli b
Hello Miss Ale,
I think that the story will be great because we can make one story with different opinions and creativity of different places in the world. I had to admit that the people of South Africa were very descptive, very creative, and another style of vocabulary, now, I think we will have 2 different styles of vocabulary. I hope we can get the stories made up so the people in Canada can read them before the classes finish for them.
Before you told us, I thought Miss Fiona was the teacher of Language. I hope they like our stories we are going to finish and also I hope we can give the stories in time.
Keep on posting,
Ramiro Sa.
Hi miss ale,
its me again!!
I again post because i would never be wothuot posting a weekend.
I liked very much the story we already made with Fiona beal and the children of south africa and i like it very much. So i think its going to be a greater idea to do it also with the kids of canada because laso we are going to have more ideas. I am very happy with this... adn very excited to do that.
see you tomorrow
bye bye
tomas j
Hello Miss Ale
I have allredy put what I think of the hero song in your wiki 6A martina.t.
And is great to see how people from Canada write. Very good idear.
Great.
Bye.
Kesses.
Martina.T 6a
Hello Miss Ale,
It will be excellent because we are going to go on with a story like we made with the ones of South Africa but this time with students of Canada. Also because this time we are going to do it in class and you can help us more that last time,
Bye, see you tomorrow at school,
Agustina F.6c
Miss Ale,
I am really excited about starting this three way story as now we will start not with a pupil of one country sharing ideas but with 3. I think and hope they come out really good and see how they write in other countries and compare it with our and learn a bit and then include it in our pieces of writing.
Well Miss Ale
See you tomorrow
Lots of love
XOXO
delfina
Hello mis Ale,
I like this idea becaus is something extraordinary we couldn't do before but today with the technology God bring us it is all posible.
Great Idea
Marcos.R
hello Miss Ale,
Is very nice to do the story with children from another country like South Africa and Canada.
today with strated we did a lot
I like to do and continue storys from another children from another world.
I would like to do another story with them but i didn´t like that always Argentina children have to finished if we do another story with them can Argentina people can start or the middle part of the story?? please!!!
I wait your answer
a lot of kisses
see you tomarrow
chaira f 6C
I haven't wwrite that comment up right there. it it strange.
Marcos.remon
Anyway I have liked a lot
Marcos.Remon
Miss Ale this Idea is great.
I like that its in groop.
joaco.m
Hello Miss Ale
I think that the stories are going to be great. When I first read the first part of the story it was really funny. I showed my mom and she chuckled. Have a great day!!!
Segundo 6C
Hello miss Ale
I would like to tell you that I coment knpw on this coment because yesterday I didnt have iternet at home but thanks because of remainding us the story of the collaborate writing
They wrote not so long stories but that doesnt matter because they where good
see you on tomorow
kisses,oli.b
Hello Miss Ale,
I really liked our story, and I liked very much doing the story with Juan, the only thing was that Segundo was absent and couldn't read and help us with the stroy.
See you,
Santi.G
Hi Miss Ale although we have already written the stories, I would like to tell you and the other children from Canada and Africa that the stories were very good and that is a good idea the collaborative stories , I liked a lot doing the collaborative stories.
Thank you keep on posting , i liked it a lot.
Vicky I
Miss Ale,
I havent been blogging in the pass of this weeks, so I am witting this comment lately. We already have made the global collaborative story! I made it with Clara and it was very reared because our story had A LOT of fiction and it was about Superman and aliens......We contiuned it together, not by parts.
I think this opportunity we had to make this international project was great because now we did not just connected with South Africa but we also conected with Canada! Today you told us that the ones of South Africa wrote very little because they are fron 4th and 5th year but the ones of Canada wrote alooooooot. That is because they are in 8th grade and today they finished the year....
Well, Im glad to blog again!
Enjoy your weekeeeend
Vicky sc.
pd: wish me luck in the interhouse!jajaja
I had much fun doing it!!! It was very nice to do another collaborative writing! We should keep on doing it...thank you
vicky m 6b
Hello Miss Ale,
I think that I´am enjoying thie projecta a lot. it is a great idea.
Have a nice day!!!
Connie
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