This week we started working on the new collaborative project on heroes using google docs.
Here are some tips:
- Remember to follow the steps for a successful paraphrasing.
- Apply the “double check rule.” Return to the original material to confirm you used your own words.
- It is extremely important for you to do lots of research, that means, READ, READ and READ all the necessary sources so that you find interesting information about your hero.
- Once you believe it is finished: pass SPELL CHECK,
- Re read the whole biography to see that there are no repetitions.
- Please avoid erasing other peer's contribution. Leave a polite comment.
- Remember to write short sentences and include full stops and capital letters after them.
- Remember to leave your personal opinion at the end of the biography.
You are doing fine. Keep on working hard and enjoy it!
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22 comments:
Miss Ale,
I was playing the game of the post that you posted before this one. But this post has something strange... The date! It tells you that you posted it the 1rst of june the first, but today is may the thirty-one. I think that as you did on etherpad, it is a good idea to write the steps in the blog, because sometimes we forget about what we had to do when we finish typing. In the class, when we entered the blog, there most of us learned what was a successful paraphrasing and what we had to do to avoid plagirism or copy paste. I think that learning about all this things that we don't have to do is a good idea, since when we do our work that we have to look for information we can do a successful paraphrasing so that we are avoiding plagirism. This project I am enjoying it and a lot, because we learn, as the video said, about ordinary people doing extraordinary things. You said that READ READ AND READ, in the partitions, in reading & writing I wrote "when you have nothing to do read and read " I think that revising and reading is great because you can improve your story or work. I hope that nobody without meaning erases a part that a group type because if this happenes, the group will enter and see less information. Lots of thanks of taking the work of writing the steps of the work that we are doing in google docs!
Keep on posting,
Good Byeee.
Kisses & Hugs
Caata A.
Hello Miss Ale,
This was a great idea of puting the instructions on the blog as you did on etherpad.
See you tomorrow
Santi.G
Hello Miss Ale!
Well I really forgot to blog ! but today I BLOG! Well! Thik this was a very good idea and ME MAIL is not working
SEE U TOMORROW!
XOXOXOXO
OLI P
Hello Miss Ale,
The steps to write the biographies beetween the three classes, its a great idea!! and also to put the steps in the blog so as to read them before giving them to you. I think that you didn`t put "Be carefull with the copy and paste" or "Be carfull, you have to paraphrese the information". As also you did with Etherpad, but the instructions on Etherpad you put them in the Blog and in the wiki. Are you going to out them aldo in the wiki?? I will try to keep in mind the instructions whenn I am writing the biography. Its a great idea the one of doing the biography of heroes because at the final of the year or when we finish with heroes, we are going to now about all the heroes becasu even we read a story of a hero adn now we write about a hero. OMG!! We now a lot.
See you tommorrow
Belu of 6b
Thanks miss ale I am really enjoying the project and I thank you for putting this advice because I really forgot to do some
See you tomorrow
Domi6c
Hi miss ale,
I was studing for a test we have tomorrow and I finished. So i remembered of the blogg, and I came to it.
Thank-you for posting this tips for us to do betteer in the hereo project it's fantastic.My person is Mahatma Gandhi, and to 6c , had to do (for my oppinion) not so easy parts. But like it said in onetip READ,READ,READ; I am sure that if you follow all these tips you will do it excellent adn it would be all easy, or very easy. Yoi have a very good idea, of everithing projects we have on class, you put the tips or the instructions on the blogg!!!You did the same with EtherPad, of avoiding plarigism, avoid pharaphresing, etc
Thank-you again
See you tomorrow
by bye
tomas j 6c
Hello Miss Ale,
Thank you for the tips for the hero on gogle docs. I think this can help us a lot on what we are doing. I really liked on what we had talked about Mrs. Beal.
See you tomorrow,
Ramiro Sa.
hello miss ale this helped alot because I had forgotten how to enter the heroe thing in goggle docs. I was also very bejind but now thanks to this I have cathed up.The blogs great I dont come since a month or mabye less .And in the thing of heroes I was about to save when I realized that I didnt parafrize any thing so I spent half an hour doing that although in my topic theres not much.When I read for second time the peace of writing there were alot of mistakes then in the third time there wer also alot of mistakes so it was very frustrating to see mmore mistakes every time you read it.
byebye
xoxo
ceci f
hello miss ale, bad news... as i am sick... the doctor told me that i wont be able to go to scholl until thursday... but I have already done my part and jero will take the things you´ve done to my house ...
alan t.
Hello miss ale:
thanks for putting the tips there are very use fullit is a very good idear to put them on the blog so when we reed the post will remember its a Great Idear
lots of thanks
KISSES
oli.b
Hi miss ale
This are very good steps to paraphrase I used them, I had Martin Luther King but luckily I finished jaja!
keep posting
ignacio f 6a
Hello Miss Ale,
I think that when I write of Mother Teresa all that tips, YES I FOLLOW THEM!!!!!
It is very interesated. I have to Read a lot to found informatin I also founded in booke and also of my head because I remember of the story that I read that was of mother Teresa so I could take information through out that places.
I have to put my personal Opinoin and I finished all, I did not get your invitation for the google docs, can you sent my the invitation?
Bye
See you tomarrow
Chiara F
Hello Miss Ale, thanks a lot and I am going to put that tips on my biography of Louis Braille. I think you have to know about his life, it´s amaizing!
the blog is great...keep on posting
ps: knitting club rocks!!
xxx
meli b
Hello Miss Ale,
Thank you for puting that tips so to now how to finish the biography of Leloir, and the part that I heat is when we have to sit and start reading until we find what we need and sometimes we read all and it is not. Also because I didn t knew that at the end when we finished we had to do personal opinion,
Bye see you tomorow at school,
Agustina F.
Hello Miss Ale, I finish the hero project. What I realy need is to longer my Personal Opinion, but however I will re chek, re read and all what is nesesary. Thank you.
Bye.
Martina.t 6a
Hi Miss Ale i think that this post is very useful for the people who don´t remember the steps!!
So next time i will just enter here instead of going to the language wiki!!
Jessi.Y
Hello Miss Ale
thanks for posting the tips wich I needed to much to work on this hero project.
This is more especifik than in the wiki, here you have much more detail so that when Im finished I can figerout what to do.
THANKS A LOT FOR THE TIPS
see you
Ian 6c
Hello Miss Ale,
The steps to write the biographies beetween the three classes, its a great idea!! and also to put the steps in the blog so as to read them before giving them to you. I think that you didn`t put "Be carefull with the copy and paste" or "Be carfull, you have to paraphrese the information". As also you did with Etherpad, but the instructions on Etherpad you put them in the Blog and in the wiki. Are you going to out them aldo in the wiki?? I will try to keep in mind the instructions whenn I am writing the biography. Its a great idea the one of doing the biography of heroes because at the final of the year or when we finish with heroes, we are going to now about all the heroes becasu even we read a story of a hero adn now we write about a hero.
bye
federico j
Hi miss ale this are perfect steps nobody can conuce. Hope to do the best on this projects.
Mateo N.
Hello Miss Ale!
Thanks you for posting the tips for writing!
I had to write the biography some days ago and i used these tips a lot....
I hope i do good on the biography and i'm going to check very well i have done well all the steps..
Xoxox
Martu.P
Hello Miss Ale,
This idea was great of puting the instructions on the blog. SANTI.B.
Hello Miss ALE this tips helped me a lot because theres one that I always forget. THANF YOU FOR HELPING US.
SANTI.B.
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