Monday, 17 May 2010

Showing sentences- Compulsory post for this week!



I challenge you to write a good showing sentence for one of these images. You must include either a metaphor, or a simile or a personification. All the best!! I'm looking forward to read all your sentences.

a) Bob felt scared
b) She looked exhausted

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15 comments:

Anonymous said...

hello miss Ale

i have choosen the one of Bob is scared i was note sore but then i decided
i have choose a metaphore it was a bit difficult to invate a metaphore but then i did
pablo.a 6a bye

Axel said...

Hi Miss Ale,
I did two of them, because I wanted to do both possibilities. Both were similies. I like the idea of learning showing sentences, because our stories will be richer.
See you after holidays,

Axel G

Anonymous said...

Hi Miss Ale,
I did a really big mistake. I sent something I had wrote baddly. I'm going to to send you another one that will be longer. Hope you receive this comment and if you do please answer me the fast as you can.
See you tomorrow
GUIDO 6B

Anonymous said...

Hello miss ale,
I chose The one of: she was exausted. Because sometimes I feel similarto her. And I chose a similie because I like compearing
See you
Ana

Anonymous said...

hello miss ale,
i have already send you this sentence and i hope you lie it.
well bye
justina 6b

Anonymous said...

hallow miss ale, i live you the coment and i think that is good.



bye juanse 6b

gianfranco.zanier said...

I chose the one of bob is scared it was FUN. it was (at first) difficult but then eeeeaaaasy..

Anonymous said...

What a good idea!, like this we will be able to practice more or the showing sentences.
Mechi G.

Carolina said...

Hi Miss Ale!
Great post.
It was a great idea because it is like working at home but we are working for school.
i chose a similie. I wanted to do one of each one.
Caro B

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
I chose "She looked exhausted" and I used a personification. It was very difficult beacuse at first I chose a simile.

Bye Lourdes Undem 6c

Anonymous said...

Hello Miss Ale,
It was very easy at the moment I saw the picture I knew wich one to use. I chose the one of Bob, It was difficult but I did a personification I love that ones.
This is a great post, to we can compare the things that happen to us with other characters. It si FUN!
Kisses
Keep on Blogging
Lucia Leporati 6a Fleming

Anonymous said...

Hi miss ale!!!
I have chosen bob is scared, i make my on SHOWING SENTENCE!
Its very good, i take a little bit of time but i think is great1!
kis
flor
6c

Carolina said...

Hello Miss Ale!
This is the second time that I do it because the other one I didn't do it in a paragraph as you preferred as to do.
I have chosen The one of the girls because when I saw the picture I all ready had an idea of what to do, so I focused on that idea.
Have a nice holiday!
Caro

Anonymous said...

hi miss ale...
sorry that i did it late but I had a problem with mI computee when I tried to do it.
I realy liked the idea...
lots of love...
sofi.k

Anonymous said...

mia añe i didnt rembered if I had did the post so im going to do it one more time


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