Ale, I would love to include a bubbleshare of the photos of how we worked doing the pbwiki!! We could also include a mixbook or a fun game that is related to each of the stories! We each look for a game that is ralted to what we are writting and we post them, for other people to play it! We could put the map of the world! It would be fantastic if we could know who enter to OUR pbwiki!!I think that we could put some instructions for how to do a choose your own fantasy story, but each group adds something different from the others. Then all the students go interhcanging pbwikis and doing little, short choose your own fantasy story!! We could put something on the sidebar...In fact, I liked the photo you put up in Readers, thinkers and writers! It is great!!!Thank you,I will come tomorrow to school,Agus.T!!
Miss AleI would like to add photos, also some games of fantasy, and maybe if one member of the group is pleased to write a story or create a games It would be great to post it in the pb wiki!! Maybe aslo some activities, but all this invented by US, the creaters of the wiki. We have to make it organaze with many links and photos and colours to make it atractive! So many people would like to get in!!Kiki
Miss Ale: i will love to include the cluster mup, the weather pixie, some games, tongue twisters, and I also agree with Agus that a bubble share will be great for the wiki because it will show to all the ones who enter the wiki how hard we worked all this time to get our pbwiki going,i think that if we include this, maybe we can include it in the front page becasue it will lok ( i think ) very nice to enter a wiki and already have the photos of the children working so hard for the people to enjoy the the wiki so much as we are expecting.I REALLY THINK THE IDEA OF PUTTING A POST FOR SUGESTIONS FOR OUR WORK IS SUPER AND VERY VERY INTERESTING!!!!THANK YOU FOR INCLUDING HTIS POST!!!I WILL LOVE IF YOU COULD INCLUDE MORE OF THIS POST FOR US TO WRITE WHAT WE THINK OR WHAT, MAYBE, COULD BE A VERY GOOD IDEA!!!!THANK YOU VERY MUCH MISS ALE!!!!SEE YOU SOON...BYEBYE...CAMI W.
Miss Ale,As Agus T and Cami W I will love to include a bubble share with all the photos of all of us working with in groups creating and writing our fantasy stories. I would love to add the clunser map, and maybe we could add some games and tongue twisters that we make. I think adding lots of colour , activitis and games to the pbwiki will make it more fun for the people who entered and maybe some people of other countries could entered too( like in this blog ! ). Maybe some of our pbwikis make famous in other places ! That would be great ! See you tomorrow,Shany M
Miss Ale:My suggestion is that we could include pictures working in the computer and we could look for pictures in google and create a page so before reading the story we can imagine of what is about. Another suggestion is that we can make like a question page that it asks questions like: How much did you enjoy the story?, If you had to give a calification to the story of 1 to 10, how much you will put? and many more questions and lost of gamess! so the page is fun!!Lucila M
HI Ale I would include pictures about our story and bubbl us and activities and games abnout our story like games about fairies and all things related to the name of our pbwiki and of our story, we could also put the map that is in your blog to see how many people from other places enter to our pbwiki!!!Then we could put like conections or links so that if you clic them you can go to the other pb wikis created to writhe the stories so that they could read different stories!Maybe we could include some tung twisters and poems related to our story we could put the instructions to wrirte a good story and include a viarity of games and fun activities inviented by US THAT YOU CAN ONLY PLAY IN OUR PBWIKI AND NOWERE ELSE!!!SE YOUOLI.B
Hey Miss Ale:Wuaw I really do not know what to say first I have lots of ideas for my groups pbwiki and the others. Well I read some of the comments and other people like Agus T have really GREAT ideas! Well this are my ideas: We could put some picture and do a slideshow in bubbleshare showing us working and some pictures of the pbwiki, we could also add the other stories of other groups from all the 6 graders, put lots of games (related to the story), and also we could create a e-mail for all the members of the group so all the people that visit our blog or other people can send us comments to make our wiki better or they could send us their pbwiki and we see their pbwiki so we get ideas from their pbwiki. Well those are my ideas if I come up with another one I will post another comment for you to know.Changing the subject I saw that lots of people are comming to see our blog from everywere!!!!!! (it is so amazing)Well see you tommorow if we do not have a practice(but it does not matter because I really enjoy practicing the concert so it will be good for the act). I hope that the concert will come all right after all the times that we practice!KissesValerie P.
zzzI would like that you can put games anda like a blog were people can put comments about the wiki and too to give ideasto the creators. Too it would be fun having challenges of what was the choose your one adventure storie was about. There are lots of ideas in my mind. It is relly fun to write our choose your own advemture,it is very chllenging, and very fun.Maxi B
Ale I love this idea of chosin your own fantasy story the only problem is that i fight alot with Andy, but it is fun and also we can practice alot our vocabulary. I love using laptops and also its a strory that we can invent us and expand our ideas and we can use showing sentences. NAd now we have our own pbwiki, thats cool and also we can enter and put new things and create them. I'm very entertained with this idea and also now we know how to create a pbwiki, so I can invent a new pbwiki in my home but I'm going to have so many: blog, efanatsy, elang, ewatson alot of pbwikis but fun. Thank you for taughting us to create a new pbwiki!! You are a super teacher!!Ines G.
Miss ale Ide love to have a type of program on wich you can dowwnloud videos. in class we can film many narations and express our ideas, its great to suggest about ideas on the wiki.. I love giving ideas, and by the way it could be grea if we had some music file on wich you downloud music and we can work relatedto the music we are hearing.. in our fantasy story.. it will b great to have as in efantasy some searching files of dictionary , rhymes. Thanks PD. I LOVE THE WIKI WE HAVE CREATED!!! OTS REALLY INTERESTINGMaia.M
Miss Ale, My suggieston is to put games form internet, also made by us also. Also put some photos, the cluster map, comics. Also adding a quiz about the story asking the question about the story and if they liked it or not also witch calification would they put if they had to choose between 1 to 10. Also to putting coments. See You,Sofi F
Hi there!I like a lot what we are doing in the pbwiki, especially because I love the books that are choose your own adventure only now we are doing choose your own fantasy story. We already wrote a fantasy story in spanish so it will be a bit more easier to do it. I think it would be fun if we put games from internet that have to do with the story. We could look them up in the groups. I would like that when the wikis are finished we could see the ones of the others and put comments. It would be very nice if anybody of another country entered the wiki. I would also like to include photos of how we worked and of drawings we could do of the story and then scan them. The idea of the web was very funny. I would like to record the fantasy story for the ones that want to hear it instead of reading it. I would love to include the map that tells you from where the people in the world enter to our wiki and also the weather pixie. It is very nice and creative. We could include activities that have to do with the fantasy elements, places, scenes and characters the story will have. We could make one as the one you put that they give you a word with the letters mixed up and with one clue you can put the word in order. We could also get housepoints for playing in other wikis. I would also like to put a video with the members of the group. I would like to do it as if it was the pbwiki we already have only this time it is going to be much more pbwikis and so they will be more ideas of how to do it so we can have different wikis. We could make ANOTHER pbwiki were we could include all the choose your own fantasy stories.See you soon,Barbie M
Miss Ale: I think I would include more lessons,, with lessons I mean (enseñansas) , that you want us to learn. More games and quizes. In the sidebar of the Efantasy, but a list of all the pbwikis you did so that you can have a easier way of getting in. I liked the idea of asking our opionion about what new thing we could do. If each one could enter to the other pbwikis and coment about the story, THAT WOULD BE GREAT! because we could see how other groups are working and you could get ideas. THANK YOU!!!!!!KATI.D!
Hello Ale I would like to have a link for comments and suggestions about the story. We could also make the same thing that is in elang. When somebody enters the wiki, a red dot appears. Ramiro T
Dear miss ale: I would love to include a lot of photos that you captured in the process of doing this wonderful proyect.. It would also be great to include a lot of games in the sidebar!! Each team could make 2 or 3 games for each pbwiki so it would much more fun!! Another idea is to make more fantasy srories but this time they could be narrated by one member of the team.. we can do this with the following groups as a knew proyect!! Another idea is we could make different coulurful pages for another people to come and sea them!! You can put the world map to know who is entering our pbwiki, and how many people liked our idea of another countries!! Another idea is we can do is to public all the different proyects we aer doing in different books like the one of the canterville ghost!! We could public the tic tac toe!! I hope we could do this things funny for a lot of people come to visit our pbwiki, it would be wonderful!! See you on monday!! Good weekend..Caro. G
Miss Ale:i would like to include in my groups wiki music and games, with fantasy things.. also animated things so when you enter on the front page-home page-- you can see fantasy things moving. Also a part where each member of the group can write things and put his or hers opinion of the wiki. Im with jose nordenstahl (the girl that moved to puerto rico) and she is very impatient she wants to go and play monopoly so I have to go.See youoli 6c
Ah and also a little map like in the blog so we can see who visits our wiki!! oli 6c
Hello Miss Ale:I am really enjoying the choose your own fantasy story is very intresting.I think working in the computer is great beause its more intresting and cooler!! I am really enjoying writing the story with barbie.m., ,martin and thomas!!Its very cool!!Well now the work is finishing but I hope that sooner there will be another work like this. Also we can invent a story in partners and publish it in the school webç!!wish you luck,barbie portela
Miss Ale,I really don`t know what else to include in my pb.wiki... I should talk it out with my group but they are backstage so we didn´t really could do a thing after finishing the bubbl share...See you,Sofia K.S
Hi Miss Ale!!!I would like to include wordsearchs, pictures (animated pictures), a nice home page, the world map so we know who entered to our pbwiki (in which country they entered), I would also like to include a bubble share of the concert!!!!BYE BYE!VALENTINA.G
Hi ale I would really like to have more links to other cool places like you have on all pbwikis and blogs.We can to do a place of coments to better are pbwikis were all children could go so like a homework we should have to go into 2 or more and post coments (of coures I don t want to have homework but it would be a great idea)Clara.r
Hello Ale. It will be great if we can do the wiki like the blog and include games. The people of China can put as coments.Ignacio V
Good question Ale.... mmm... well, I would like to add games,music, photos, and things that may help us study if we forget our folders in shool... It would be like an extra tool that you can use to study for tests. And well, the images and music,and photos... well, just for make it funnier and look better!See you Andy
Hi miss Ale, in the pbwiki I would like to include pictures and animation clips. Me and Felie S are doing the last paragraph that is in pairs, we are about to finish it and we are going to start the final part of the thewalkingchair story. Our group is including some showing paragraphs and also some similies. We are doing it longer than the web and improvising it. I also want to see the other groups fantasy stories(I think they would be very good and long). I also heard that the group of Marcos T has a very funny ending because I heard some rumors about it I am anxious to finish this project.bye bye Thomas D
Miss Ale, I would like to include a little comic and some crossword puzzels on our wiki, but I´m not sure how to post them. When we finish our "choose you own Fantasy story" I will find out how to post them.Thank you, Felipe MPD: Before posting the crossword puzzels on our wiki I shall find them first. JAJA
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