What type of sentences are they?
If you were asked to expand them, think of the fantasy stories that we read (The Catnterville Ghost, Dear Little Ghost, Who goes down this dark Road, The Ghost Story (6A)). Who would you choose as a character, as the sett
ing, as a fantasy element to include in your showing paragraph?
He/ she was scared.Sitting on the sofa, she looked exhausted.
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Hi Miss Ale,
I think that she was sittng on the sofa, exhausted. I woukd choose the twins. Setting would be the Canterville castle and Fantasy element would be the little pople living on one head.
See you tomorrow
Luca M
Hello Miss Ale:
I agree with Luca of choosing the twins also the setting and the living people in the hair.
I agree with Luca and Franco of choosing the twins, the setting Canterville castle and fantasy element the people living on the head.
Hi Miss Ale,
I think that he was scared.I thought of the man in a ghost story, the setting would be Canterville casle and the fantasy element would be the faires.
See you tomorow!!!
Hi Miss Ale:
I chose the boy in the bed.
The sentence is telling.
I would chose as a character, Washington in the Canterville Ghost when they (the whole family, including him) saw the blood in the floor just when they arrived.
MARCOS L
Miss Ale
i agree with Franco and Luca i think that she only was seeting on the sofa. Of main character i gould choose Elsbeth.
Hi Miss Ale
I think that she was scared.I think that I would choose Elsbeth and the setting would be in the Cantaville castel.Finally the fantasy element that I would choose is the little girl who had little people living on the head.
See you tomorrow!
Clara G
Miss Ale
I will choose the picture of the girl that seems exhausted, the character would be the girl Elsbeth from the story dear little ghost and the setting would be the house were they spent christmas one year before the girl died and she is very tired after dancing in the forest with the faires.
Ernestina P.
I think that the girl was sitting on the sofa, exhausted and very bored. Me to as franco and luca think that I whode choose the twins with the living people in the hair.
BENJA.L
Hi Miss Ale, I think I would also choose the girl in the sofa who is exhausted. I would choose the twins because since they do tricks, they make her exhausted. The setting would be in the garden and the fantasy element would be the faries.
i will chose the veneti as characters, the canterville chase as a setting and the fantasy element would be a ghost of canerville.
Miss Ale,
I think that for when he was scared I would choose the canterville ghost because he was scared of the twins because they were always playing trucks on him. I would also choose the the house in the Canteville Ghost because I liked how it was an old house and it is good for a fantsy story. For my fantasy element I would choose the people that are living in Amanda´s hair becuase they tell you things that are very intresting that noebody else noes and they can always keep you company.
I think the girl sitting in the sofa is very tired. I would chose the veneti people and mr otis for the main characters.
For the setting I would chose the canterville castle.
The fantasy element would be the venety people living in mr otis head.
I would choose the little boy because I chose the dead forest and he is scared because of the dead forest, and I chose the little people in the head and Amanda would be my character because i like her suspence.
Hello Miss Ale, I would choose the scared boy because you have so many choices like: He was scared because the giant, monster, or ghost.
see you later, Andres ku
I will choose the cantervile castel for a setting and the charecters can be the venetti and Elsbeth. The fantasy element will be the chrismas soks.
Hi Miss Ale:
I liked the little photo because I like cartoons and it is funny. I think that the boy is scared and a lot. In the other photo the girl looks very tiered and she looks licke Elsabeth. To expand the text of the little photo I would thiscribe better how the boy looked because what is sais int the post is telling and we have to show. The other photo Is better but it still doesnt show a lot.
Hi Miss Ale,
I chosed the girl on the sofa,
I think that the girl is Virginia and she was sitting on the sofa because she is exhausted of riding horseback.
I would choose the girl because I chose the girl that goes down the road because she is exhausted of having the little people in her head and for setting I chose cantervile castle and fantasy element the people in the head.
For me the little girl is Virgina. She is living in Amanda´s house .like Amanda died she is in a interchange. But Amanda can`t go to the Otis family. The moment Virgina goes into the house little people, the Venetti started living in her hair.
Hello Miss Ale I would choose the girl on the sofa because I would think of her as Washington.
Setting would be in a old haunted house, the fantasy element would be the ghost that is scaring Washington.
For me the boy is a twin scared because the canterville ghost did a trick to him.
The girl is Amanda's ghost.
My setting would be a haunted castle and a forrest.
Hi Ale
I think that she is Virginia and she is exausted because she was horseback ridin near the Canterville castle and she had little Venetti people in her head.
sophi
Hello Miss Ale:
I forgot to expand the image that you had put.I changed some things like the setting and the fantasy element which they are a ghost and the road.I choose the guy in the sofa
and I will put that the other twin had died in a road because a car run over he and an old man said to the other twin that he was going to came back in the way of a ghost. So hes nervous and scared that his brother may appear.
Sorry for putting at the first time the same things as Luca but inn that day I thought of that things and I read Luca`s comment because it was the only one in this post so as I thinked the same thing as Luca
i putted that I agree . I DIDNT COPY OF LUCA.
See you tommorow.
Hi Miss Ale:
I liked most the one of the boy. I think he was scared of something he saw on his bedroom. He is like my little sister at night.It is similar to the face that the cantaville ghost did when the two little twins scared him and it was very fanny. The other picture it is like Elsbeth and I don´t like that character and I love the cantaville ghost. I would choose the cantaville ghost, the twins, the forest for the setting and for the fantasy element the little people on Amanda´s hair.
Hi miss Ale:
I chose the picture of the boy scared. For me its one of Elsbeth´s brothers. He is in the Canterville castle. He´s afraid because tiny people wanted to hurt him so he ran to his bed and hid under the sheet.
I would choose Amanda because it would be perfect to do that Amanda is a very strange and mysterious girl.
My fantasy element would be that Amanda says that he can see dead people so her parents think that she was crazy and very strange.
My setting of my fantasy story would be in a small town, that is very far away from the city because I can do that after Amanda went to the town in, the town start to happen strange things.My setting of my fantasy story would be in a small town, that is very far away from the city because I can do that after Amanda went to the town in, the town start to happen strange things.
Hi miss Ale:
In the one that the boy is scared I would hose `Who goes down this dark roads`, because the little people are scared about what is going to happen to Amanda.
And it the picture that the girl is scared I would chose the one of `The Cantervile Ghost`, because the ghost is exhausted of truing to scare the tween.
I think that the girl would be Virginia. She was in the forest of unknown horse riding all day long with the duke of Cheshire. Thats way she is so exhausted laying on a stone.
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hi miss Ale,
I choose the boy that is scared.
I would say that the boy is a twin and the other twin dissapeared in the Canterville Castle. I think that the boy is scared because he lost his brother and he sais he saw the Veneti tribe by his bed. The boy sais that the Veneti tribe made a village under his bed and they made so much noise that he could not sleep.
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I think she was sitting on the sofa I would choose Elsbeth as main character, the school and the ghosts appearence.
I chose the scared boy
the canter ville ghost scared one of the boys of the family, noe he is hounting in their house en de venetti people came out of the mothers hair and they are going to help them
the girl is virginia exhausted of all the people in her hair because amanda is dead and the venneti are in her hair and the scared boy is scared because the canterville ghost scared him.
I think the girl was sitting. I agree with Luca And Franco of the twins and also the setting because it is a very good place and a fantasy element.
I think the girl in the sofa is tired and the boy in the bed is scare because he saw something very scary.
Hi Miss Ale,
I would choose the scared man in a ghost story, for setting the canterville house and magic element the ghosts and wands!
Bye see you tomorrow!
Sofi C
Hi Miss Ale,
I will choose the girl in the sofa as Virginia in Canterville Ghost, not ehausted, or ehausted of thinking what to do with Canterville Ghost.
The one of the child on the bed, the first thing it happen in my head, was Amanda(who goes this dark road) like scared of the Veneti that heard a sound the first night she had them.
See us twomorrow,
Euge
Hi Miss Ale!
I would choose the exausted girl, that is a showing sentence, because it doesn't tell inmediately the main idea. As a character I would choose the twins of the Canterville ghost, as a fantasy object, ghosts and the Veneti people living in Amanda's head!
See you
Hi Miss ALe!!
This is a telling sentence.
I agree with Ariana, I think that she would be exhausted because of the twins playing tricks on her. I would also choose the Canterville castle as the setting and the people that lived on Amanda´s head as the fantacy element.
See you!
Miranda C
Hi Miss Ale:
I will chose the one of the girl because I sea it more atractive for a story or for me. It is better explaned that is scared the cartoon one but I will chose the one of the girl
I would be Elsbeth or Amanda, because when i was little i believed in fairies and in ghosts!!!!
I would chose the exhausted girl, as a character I would chose Amanda, as the fantasy element I would chose the little people living on someones head and as a setting the Canterville Castle
Hi Miss Ale
I would choose Amanda as the girl, she would be exhausted because of the twins that play tricks on her. The setting would be the Canterville castle and the fantasy elemant would be the veneti (the people who lived in Amanda´s head)
See You!
Miranda
Hi miss. ale
Now that we are doing the story and we have to choose one, that 2 pictures are very good to do a story they are the 2 very interesting because they give you an idea to write a story with that picture and add it. When I write a story the first thing i do is to imagine a picture of how I am going to do the story.
Bye see you tomorrow!!!!!!
Hi Miss Ale,
I chose the one of the boy was scared, because I think this was a better idea to make this telling sentence, to a showing sentence
From the characters I have chosen Elsbeth and for the fantasy element I chose the people in Amanda's hair!!
See you, Paulina
Hello Miss Ale.
I would choose the image of the boy that is scared the sentences are telling because they go straight to the point and they do not describe what the imagene I would choose as a character the twings of Canterville Ghost and the fantasy element would be the ghost now that we have started with that in Language I made a text about these. For me it was difficult but all the things that you put in the site helped my a lot also the photocopys that you gaved to us like the strong adjetives or the similies.
See you tomorrow
Clara V
Hi Miss Ale
I choose the boy that was scared in the bed and i think that is a telling sentence.
I will use the canterville casel of seting and a ghost as fantasy element.
see you
Hello Miss Ale
I think i would choose the one of he/she was scared because i prefer to do it like in the ghost story that someone pools the sheets of.
I would include the ghost because I like the idea of a ghost haunting children and then children playing tricks on them. I also would choose the twins in the Canterville castle.
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Prevous comment is mine
Hi miss ale I had alredy finished my story but while i did it i had to find alot of adjectives to make it a showing sentence. i had chose the one of the scared boy because i think it was funniest and moreintresting to wright. I think is very good too start changing telling for showing because thats what writers do and because is better for our vocabulary. by see you tomorrow
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