COMPULSORY POST FOR THIS WEEK!!!!!!! STARTING TODAY
Dear all,
I have been re reading your fantasy story wikis and I have found many aspects that you have not covered. Please click here and follow these guidelines to improve your wiki. If I have to assess your work by taking into consideration what I have read, the marks will not be the expected ones. You have one week , that is until Monday, August 16th to follow these instructions and complete your work.
Remember that you have to go to http://pbworks.com, then you click on "LOG IN", with your school account and the usual password. Then your wiki will appear and you can start editing it!
Thank you.
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69 comments:
Miss Ale,
I'm none to proud with what I am producing in English. My Spanish story is coming out better in my opinion, despite my efforts. Oh well. Nothing to be done about it now.
Megan
Hi Miss Ale,
I think I did a good job in all the aspects but I maybe could have added more fantasy elements and be a bit clearer, but I think I did a good job.
See You Tomorrow, Franco.R
Miss Ale, I am not happy with my fantasy story, think I did not pay much atention as the one I am doing in Spanish.
The comment just post is of Santiago Bugallo
Hi Miss Ale I think the people are confusing with the misteriesof Mr.Burdick and the one you are assesing right now is hte choose your own fantasy stories.Our grup is missing images.Bye Marina
Hello Miss Ale!
I didnñt understand what you wanted to say, it is of the wiki of the choose your own fantasy story? because I think we don´t have another wiki, except for the language wiki..
Ale, can you answer me through out a mail.. please
Thanks..
Belu
Hi Miss Ale
I think I did a good job but I didn`t payed much attenntion in the story so I should had added more adjectives and fantasy elements.
Bye
Tomas P
Hi Miss Ale
The truth is that the first fantacy story I rote wasent that good that thisa one we are riting of the mistteries of bourdick I improve alot and I now that ta the end of the year I would be a profesional o ritting fantacy stories
See you on next class
By:Dolores S.G
Hello miss Ale,
Axel and I finished the work and Agustin Harry and Vartan didnt finish the work of the time machine,Our part is compleatly finished with images and colour.
Andres J
6a
Hi Miss Ale,
I say the same as Andrés, he and me finished but the other three team members didn´t work and didn´t complete the 7 lines. They played a lot so we don´t want to do their work (even though we helped them in a part) and we are a bit mad at them.
See you
Axel G ( Andrés also thinks that)
I think im doing well in the english story but I think that the one of spanish is going better.
I will try to improve my english story.
Mati 6c
I think I have to progres a little but I think my story was graet.
Mateo P.
Hello Miss Ale!
I had to finish it in Portugal and I didn't know how to plug in photos well I didn't know that we had to plug photos so I wanted to ask you if you can send me a mail explaining how to do it or tomorrow in class you show me how to do it.
Kisses
Caro
hi miss ale
i got from home and started to correct he story
kisses vani
Hi Miss Ale
Shure I will chek mines before is too late thank you for remembering us about it cause we all need to polish it!!! I will do righgt now that!
Thank you again
Kisses
Valen P. 6A
I already think that I correct but only the parts that I made except for the first one because if not is not fair that one improve and the other ones dont do nothing.
Facu. V.
Hello Miss Ale:
I think me and my group made a great job: we all made morethan 7 lines. I think I will have to improve on expressing my ideas. Thank you to remaind us. See you in class!
Felipe 6B
I think that in my fantasy story I did my best and hope it came out OK.
See Ya toomorow
Oliver.P
I didn't have too many errors I had to correct some things but not much.
Gian Z
Hello Miss ALe
I already corrected my piece of work
Bye fran 6C
Miss Ale,
I am done correcting! Luckily, it was not much. Well, see you soon,
Makena. (6c)
Hi miss Ale
I v´just finish correcting the story . Hope now is okay.
See you tomorrow
LOVE
AGUS
hello miss ale:
Well for what you said today this post is about the story we did in group...
Well I think so. For what I herd was that this post was not about the Harris Burdick stories it was about the fantasy storys about the: "choose your own adventure story", the one we did in May I think???
Well changing to the subdject, in the little time out we had I corrected my work with sofi.k
in her house.because in that time I think we didn`t have the computer I think.
This is another thing I am very happy that we started with the harris burdick stories, I realy whanted to wright these stories because all the images were so realistic that I couldnt stand watching them all the time while we were working.
Well in spanish today I finished writing the story I have to do the clean copy, i think that I finished the ruff copy of english???
Well I don`t know...
see you tomorrow.
lots of kisses
bye bye have a great day
...
melanie.a
6a
I already corrected our spelling mistakes an all of that.
Oliver and Eugenio have to put images to their pages because I already put 1 foto to my page and 1 foto to mine and tobias.
Matias 6c
HI
I think that with lara we ready include all fantasy elements and I think we did a good job in all the aspects
clarita.f
Hi ale
One question, we have to do the right a comment or only do the thing of the wiki???
Anyway I already did it. I only had to change on thing.
BYE
TEO.A
hello miss Ale
we are proud to listen to you telling as story jaja im very hapy to stop with fantasy because im not very good writing sotrys bye
pablo.a
I ALREADY CORRECT ALL THE PBWORKS, OF THE GROUP BUT CAN YOU SEE IT BECAUSE I THINK IS CORRECT BUT FOR NOT TO HAVE DOUBTS........
THAN YOU,
SANTIAGO FZ
6C
DODDS
Hello Miss Ale
I like very much my story I have just corrected it. I have to correct only mine o all?
Nacho
Hello mis Ale
I like my story I`ve corected it.
I hope you like it so.
macu
Hi Miss Ale,
I am not fascinated with my production in the choose your own fantasy story wiki, so I have to do my better effort in this remaining time. In the wiki, lots of things were missing and there were several mistakes. Now that I entered to the wiki I added pictures that were missing and spell checks were really needed. Now I think it improved a lot. Oh yes,I forgot, also we had punctuation mistakes and indentations, but now is all added to the wiki.
See you next week
GUIDO 6B
Hello Miss Ale,
I couldn't enter because I am blocked by someone of my group. I want to enter but I can't. Please tell the girls of my group that the one that did it please correct it because if not I am not going to work and I want to correct some things I don't like. Somethings are the images and letter.
Please help me!
See you in class!
Keep on Blogging
Kisses
Lucia L. Fleming 6a
Hi Miss Ale
I in the part that you have to do alone is very well. I allso pasd the spell check in all the pages and put a foto in the intruduccion because there wasent any foto
By Tobias Madariaga
Hy Miss Ale
I think our Choose your own fantasy story is quite well, I think we need more images.
Can you send me a mail telling me what things we have to improve in or what to make for it to be better....
Im trying my best to improve our wiki, because we worked really hard on it. I think the writing is okay. We had a lot of fantasy elements, and we did the spell chek. But I see your not quite proud of our stories. Our story its quite imaginative and I think that is a good thing, but maybe it is TOO imaginative, so I want your opinion. In my opinion my group and I worked well but I think we could have done it much better, I have to say. Well please send me an e-mail that will help me a lot to improve our wiki. It is good to have an opinion of a teacher. Thank you for giving us a little bit more time to make better our wiki, and I hope every group can improve their wiki.
Lots of Love
Vicky M
dotheHi Miss Ale
I add some things to my story and I could finished better. But a long time ago you told me something that I had to add to my story but I don't remember what thing it was...
Kiss see you tomorrow.
Franca.G
Miss Ale:
Plis remember me tomorrow, to talk to you, because I didnt understand so well. Thankyou
sofib
Miss Ale
altough I didn´t write a wiki I really like your advice!!!!
Camila
I checked spelling and added fofos.
Nico f 6b
Miss Ale:
I talk with Michelle and she tould me she would put the link for the other page, I already entered and change and put some things
see you on tuesday
flor
Hello miss Ale
Thanks for remainding us to do some modifications in our story because is good to modificares because i think i hace some mestaks there. This is ver funny because im rutina this on the itouch
Bye l
Pablo.a
I think in my engilsh story I did not like expres or insert such many atettion as im doing with the spanish one,,, I think i would get a bit lower mark in the engilsh story comparing it to the spanish onee...
Seu
Eugenio.S
Hello Miss Ale!!
I corrected the things in the wiki of choose your ow fantasy story and I add images and corrected some things that were bad.. I didn't put images in every girl's story part because if they don't like it, they would change it. Hope it is all well
See you in class on Tuesday!
Belu b. 6B
hi miss ale
in the holidays i finished all the wiki
but i don t have an acount so i did it with ana ines name
but i put all the pictures and correcte dsome things, so what else i have to do?
kisses vale g
Hi Miss Ale,
I had already finished checking my Own Fantasy Wiki Story. Also I checked the Introduction and the part where Agostina, Makena and I wrote an option. I think is option B.
Bye Miss Ale, I will see you on Tuesday.
I hope what I wrote in the comment is ok.
Bye Lourdes Undem 6c
thank you miss ale!!!!!
dont worry i have managed it
justina 6b
Hello mrs Ale!!!
I already did my part and I told the rest of teh group to finish, I don't know if they did finish but I hope so.
Bye
Pancu
Hi Miss Ale!
At the beginig i was rally confused, i didnt rally knew if we needed to correc the wiki or the misteryes Of harás burdick. Finally i understood
Kisses sol
Hi miss ale
AT the begining I think that we didint had to corecct the wikis but nos that I see them .... jajaj
Kisses Sofi f
Sorry for the ortografical erorrs I meant that I didnt know that we had to corecct them I think that they were perfect !
Sofi f
Hi Miss Ale, thank you for giving us more time for this project than the nessesary. Have a nice holliday tomorrow.
Bye Bye Agostina 6C doods.
Hi miss Ale
I corrected all what I thought it was wrong but there wasent so many things. But when I corrected I knew I didnt have so many fantasy elemnts so I add them.
FRancisco.T
Hi miss ale
first I had some little problems but then all whent well
thank you a lot!!
milagros.s.g brown 6c
Miss ale,
I think I maked well
Artu Elsztain
Miss ale,
I think I maked well
Artu Elsztain
Hello miss ale...
I added some adjectives on the story and i will keep adding some on other parts.
Goodbye JUanchi 6a
Hello Miss Ale
I think I had done right. I passed the spell check and everyone of my group did more than 7 lines.
Manuel 6ºB
SORY I dink thet JNOW i DO IT BETTER
SORY BY THE HOUR
RAMIRO
Hi Miss Ale
in the fantasy story i pasted a few pictures that i thought would be significant for the reader
but people of my group are still missing some pictures and i am worried because I dont know if they will remember to do it
Bye Lara
I already finish the part I do alone and with ale I pu colour to the letters and some images. I also saw allot of mistake like tense and I also correct some thing that were in the past.
JOSE
Hi miss Ale ,
today it was a catching up day for me and i am finishing with my foto story.But you see I ve been trying for 1 hole our to enter the pbworks wiki but i think marina has put another password or miss spelled My surname or whatever but the point is that i couldnt enter my wiki. I even reseted my password but nothing appeard when I cheked my mail. So I told claraf to see without editing what i was missing. she called me and told me that I just had to add apicture and that the rest was quite ok.
tomorrow i will go to midey club and ask marta.
kisess
giorgia 6b.
i am telling the truth.
Miss Ale,
I think my group and I have improved a lot the wiki special the parts of every body. Now I will try my best so that the wiki goes out perfectly well. Good way of making sure everybody enters the wiki.
Bye
Alejo N.
hi miss ale
I had corrected the mistakes , and included photos and aded adjectives and I done it more clear
santiago m
Hi miss ale
I reviced EVERYTHING. and I think that it is correct. well hope it is.
sorry that is SO but I was puting my PJ on when I remembered.
well allthough that I did it, haha.
lots of love
sofi.k
HI!!!!
Sorry I entered the blog did everyting but forgot to put the comment SORRRRRRRRYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!
nicky b
Hello miss ale,
I corrected all of my mistakes with the rubric you shouded us. This is a very fun project!. Hope you like what I corrected (In my opinion now it is better).
See you,
Ana
Hi miss ale,
Im sorry i dindnt blog, i had alot of things in my head but i think i did a good job by writing well my story(i think), i did the best i could do and tried to improve my writing.
MarcoS
I checked all the spelling mistakes on the story and I belive it is okay. See you later.
BYE
vartan
I checked all the tences and mistakes and I think I corrected all of them and I added some parts.
BY
Harry
hi miss Ale,
I wanted just to inform you that last sunday in the end I called marina and she told me to check on her acount so just to let you know that I did the work on her acount at 8 last sunday. I spelled cheked and added some pictures.
kisess
Giorgia 6b.
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