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Yes my part is OK.
bye
franciscob
Yes Miss Ale,
I already checked my part, it's ok.
Ramiro Sa.
Hello Miss Ale,
I have checked all and it is ok, I only have a big problem, the URL is wrongly written, and WE CAN NOT CHANGE IT.
Joaco S. 6ºB
i think this will really help to do and correct our story
JuanV.P
Hello Miss ALe,
I check all My fantasy story, I had all exept a picture so I put one and now I only have to look to pictures more for to pages that are of rodrigo ad joaquin and I have to tell them what picture do they would like for there end and then I read two times our story complete and is all write it has spelling besteaces, niether no mayuscc after a the full stop, is all perfect we have already finished dexept for 2 picturesx tyhen I going to tell them so they put the picture that they want because if not they tell to me thats they don´t like it so I prefer that they put it,
I like a lot this post and this progect
a lot of kisses
chiara 6C
Miss Ale i need to put only photos.
bye
joaco.m
hello miss ale
myt story is okay, and there is a fun thing, my ending is longer that the part of the story that comes before jaja, what strange!!
bye
ignaciof
Hello Miss Ale
I don´t know when you will see this, in the morning or in the night. But I hope you have a great day.
I´v already checked all this steps and I think I have all correct.
Mateo N.
hello miss ale, i check my part.
bye.
alan t.
Hello Miss Ale,
Ive checked my part and it is ok, but i will also tell all my group,
Bye Miss Ale,
Agustina F.
Hi Ale
My part is okay I cheked my part.
Bye
carla.d
Hello Miss Ale,
I allready finished my part and chcecked and corrected. I checked all the group part, the one of Ceci and me and the one of me alone! I had a really good time corfrecting it!
Kisses Belu D
Fran It is not only your part it's all the story. Did you follow instructions in the link?
Dear all
Once again!!! Through your comments I can see that you have been checking just your individual part, YOU are part of the story so you need to check the whole story!!! FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS, please. Thank you!
Hi Miss Ale:
I had reviced our story and only we have to put images. thank you.
bye sofi 6c
hello miss ale
I had finished correcting it in IT but I revewed it and I fownd some mistakes in the past tense but I correct them.It is very good and it all makes sense I like it very much I hope you do.
I checked all the story and it's OK.
tomin
Hello miss ale, I checked all the story and some parts have errors, I will tell my team and we shall have it corrected for friday...
See you
Domi
Hello Miss Ale I already corrected all my text. I also corrected the you´s and the simple´s presents of all the texes of my group.
HOPE YOU LIKED THE STORY !!!
Santi.b.
Hello Miss Ale!
I have seen the instructions and I have follow it one of them and my team also. Now I am going to include a picture if I find one to go to the story.
Good Bye,Jose G.M 6A
Miss Ale,
I had checked that our part in general including my part is okay and it is. I had to add some pictures but the other parts where alright.
Kisses & Hugs
Cata
Hello Miss Ale,
I just wanted to say that I already checked my part and it is perfect.
Segundo 6C
Hello miss ale
I had checked all of it but I realise they did not had any spelling or you problem but they some gramar spelling of past when it has to be present.
tomas.f
Hello miss Ale how are you
I check all the stories and they were generaly ok there were some mistakes but it was good it seems like someone else had already check it.
Julian.F
Hello Miss Ale, I followed the instucctions. I put a lot of photos!!!
the blog is great...keep on posting
ps: I lobe working with fantasy!
xxx
meli b
Hello Miss Ale, it was very difficult because I had to do a lot of calles. But my work is wayne.
Bye.
Nicolas .I.
Hello Miss Ale, Im worid becaue juan didnt do his part yet what can I do?
See you tomoroow!!
Nicolas .I.
Hello Miss Ale!
I have checked the hole story and revised the spelling mistakes, The verbs tenses and the you.I have also put in some images in each part!
I hope I have done a good job!
Xoxox
Maartu.P
Hello miss Ale
I checked our wiki.
Luki
Hello Miss Ale,
I corected all the parts,speling mistaks and the tenses, All in second person.
The nother group members I thik they will check it again, I hope so.
Bye.
Martina.T 6A
Hello Miss Ale,
I still need to improove and finish my part.Then I will follow the steps and chek with the grid of the evaluation to see if our story is okay.Hope that everyone's part is okay and everybody checks everything.
Bye,
Eleonora
Miss Ale:
I cheked and I already finished its okay
kisses
oli.b
Hello Miss Ale,
I already corrected all my text. I also corrected the you´s and the simple´s presents of all the texes of my group.
HOPE YOU LIKED THE STORY !!!
bye
federico.j
Hello Miss Ale
I already check my book.
Rodrigo
Hi Ale
I looked at all the story and I think that it is all correct I did copy paste in word to see if there was any mistake.
BYE
carla.d
Hello Miss Ale,
I told you that i was going to revise, so i revised all the story and it is better now, i have already put the photos and everything,
Bye Miss Ale,see you tomorow,
Agustina F.6c
Hello Miss Alee.
I have checked EVERYBODYS part, (of the team I belong)I changed a bit of everyones, but tomorrow I will tell everyone. I think Oli P. didn't checked her part, because there was no photo in her last, individual part, so I added one just in case. I liked working in this project, because we had a chance to cooparate as a group. And sincerally, our group had no fights, of who does this and who does that. Because generally, all groups fight in team work. So I was really surprised. Hope we can do another work like this one. Anf thanks for remainding us to check our parts and put the thng that says excellent, good poor etc. Hope to see you tomorrow, and can't wait to WRITE oure fantasies stories tomorrow,
Lots of love,
Celi P.
Hello miss ale
I cheked all the story and it is ok.
marcos.s
hello misxs ale,
yes, i've check my story and my part.
xoxox
maru.t 6C
Hi Ale I have checked and read all the story and spelling mistakes and I corrected them . There are pictures , so I only had to read and correct the story.
Thank You , great post
Bye
Vicky I
Yes mis ale,
I checked the story and I corrected it. It is Ok.
Byeee
Hello Miss,
I have checked my part and read all the story, I think it really makes sense. Ive changed or corrected some things in my part, and now I guess its fine. One doubt, we dont have to correct the other one's part, dont we?
well, my part has got images so well.....
see you tomorrow!
Vicky SC
Hello Miss Ale:
I corrected my part, its oky, it has an image and it makes sense with the story.
I will wait until you correct it to see if it is realy well.
Bye
From: clara 6c
Hello Miss Ale,
I had been correcting my errors:
First I didn’t now how to insert an image in the wiki so I asked Marta and she teach me.
then I had a another problem because today internet wasn’t working very well so I asked my mother to help me then of a lot of tries mom could fix it !!!!!!!!!
Finally I could correct the wiki and comment the blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the coment is up is mine
lui m
6c
Miss Ale,
I already check and correct all our story.
a big kiss
sofi 6b
Dear miss Ale:
I have internet again and I have cheked the work. My hole part is ok.. just a question: are images needed???
See you on Tuesday:
Ramiro Sc
I 've cheked the story
nico b
Hello Miss Ale
I have checked all.
Ian
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