Miss Marta has shared this slideshow for you to get some ideas for the video on Internet. It is a presentation that won the first prize. The topic is different but it is a great presentation, very effective. Hope you like it!
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miss ale:
this is the first time bloged first!
yes that video was grate we can get some ideas to put on our video
see you tomorrow!
oli.b
Miss Ale,
The video is really great. NOW I UNDERSTAND WHY IT GOT THE FIRST PLACE! It is really very showing, in the two aspect, with the words(because they were really short sentages very showing)and with the images. Specially the images, because some dosen´t even have some sentences to explain it. It is great, I loved some images like for example the one of did you know? the backround was really funny and creative. But the one I think was the most showing of all was the one that was crouded with people and it explained in a sentence how many people lived now on Earth and how many more people will live here in the next years. That is really interesting. For me the meaning of that foto (or slide) is that, there is a lot of people that live in the world nowdays and we should try to start saving the water now. Because if know we are having problems in some more years there would be no water at all, and people should drink at least 5 bottles of water a day and if we don´t have enough many people would die. Specially the poor people, because rich would manage to buy some water, but poor people won't and thats very sad. I love the meaning of the video itselve. For me it means that we should save the planet, and stop contaminating, to stop global warming. I am very worried about the planet, I hope all this problems would end, because now I imagen my children or grandchildren having to suffer because global warming, that is really sad! This brought me a lot of ideas, I would share with my group tomorrow- in language. I would love to do this subject on the video(although interner is really fantastic too) because I really know the music I can add, there are a lot of songs that talk about saving the world. I know for example the one of John Lennon(that a little boy singed in the concert of 1st 2nd and 3rd) and a song from Miley Cyrus called Wake up America, they are really
meaningful songs, they really make you reflect. Not more than this video, but they are great. It is a little bit complicated to choose a song but we will manage.
Well see you, Thank you for putting this video to help us with some ideas and Thank you Miss Martha for looking for the video.
Shany M
Miss Ale
I loved the video. I already have many ideas of what to put in our video. I have never seen such a wonderful video. I ho`pe and I know that we are going to be able to do a video like that one but we are going to have to work very hard. Our group already knows what to find and what to do so as we get a computer we are going to start working and we are not going to waste a minute. I loved the video because it was very complete and you can understand as if they were talking to you. Some videos that people make are not so good because they are very long and you don't like to read them because the pictures are not good the information is not well put and there is nothing interesting about it. This video gives you all the information you need to know about thirst what we have to do to stop this and it traps you. It has very good information, it is very well summarized and the best of all is that the pictures are really nice and they really say or explain what the people are trying to transmit to you. They were also able to do such a wonderful video because the topic is something that is really worrying people. It is something that we are going to have to fix because if not there will be a big loss of something that is really important for us and that is people. If we don't do something fast in about five or ten years people are going to start to die of thirst. In one part it said that "According to the U.N. kids die of an infection every fifteen seconds" that really broke my heart. Many kids of many ages or big people die because of the water they drink. They don't have clean water because maybe they take it out frrom a lake that is all dirty. I saw a program that it showed that people had a little well were they had all dirty water that looked like mud that really was the water they drank. It is true that almost everything in our planet is thirsty but sometimes we use water in a bad way and maybe we are using it for something we don't need when somebody can use it better and for a better use. When you watch the video you feel that inside of you you want to stand up and go immediatly to do something. We can do all the time something to help people with water. We also have to think for what we are using water. This video is really good and I think that we are going to do a video just like this one and also because the topic we are doing is really important and this video is through where we can tell the people what is happening. Thank you for posting this. It gave me many ideas!! SEE YOU TOMORROW!!!!
Lucia V
Great video! when I saw how much slides there were, I said to myself "This will be boring, so I must wach it to be able to post, bahh" but it was intresting, and when I was in the 40th slide, I thought it would be a long way to finish it! but it was faster each time, and It was really cachy! Again, good video, I recieved Marta´s mail too!
See you tomorrow!
Andrés Posbeyikian
but miss ale, wi seiv a lot of uoter and ui dount uant de uoter in de world tu phinill.
Dear all;
Whoever has posted the last comment, I believe it is a lack of respect as regards the comment itself and as regards the spelling. This person was really anonymous but won't get any extra credits.
I want to thank all those students who have really used this blog as a supporting learning tool and really made use of it effectively throughout the year.
Miss Ale
The video was great!!! i really liked it.
Every slide means a lot, we been warned about this a lot of times and there are lots of videos about it! I don't really want the water to finish! I don't know what will happen next! I want a good future for everybody but without water it is impossible.
The video really touched me, it really makes us all reflect on how we are harming the world.We all ahve to get the idea that the water some day will finish, and it can be very soon, or later but for that WE have to make a strong effort to make it better. There are many people who help but there are many more which don't care a thing, they think this videos are just nonsence or useless. But there are not, WE ARE REALLY HAVING SHORTAGES OF WATER and we need to help and for that we have to convince everybody to help with all the ideas we can get to safe more water. And if noone wants to help, we have to make bad things, like rising the price of water a lot, and there yes, people wouldn't use so much because if not htey have to pay fortunes. But that is not something good to do but we have to find other ways to make everyone spend more water.
WELL MISS ALE I REALLY LIKED THIS SLIDESHOW( THANK YOU MARTHA TOO)
SEE YOU SOON...
Kiki
Miss Ale...
The slideshow is really good; I know why it got the first prize now. The pictures were perfect, they were not blury, and made sense with the information it gave. I liked the picture in the part were it said: "We are ALL water creatures" it was really a funny picture. Don't you? Thank you for using the idea I sujested you. This slideshow really gives us many ideas. What I liked the most was:
1. The picture of water creatures.
2. The meaning of the slideshow.
3. The slideshow taught about water, and we did not got bored, because the pictures were attracting and it had short sentences but with a BIG meaning.
See you tomorrow,
Valerie P.
The video was great!
I really enjoyed it and I could learn new things. When I finished watching the video I got really thristy jaj! So I went to get some water! This video had given me many ideas for our video. I like the topic, allthough I find it more intrested the one of Internet. This video deserved the first place, it was very straight to the point and you could understand it very well. The video hooked me because it was really intrested. The images were excellent and with lots of quality and they really represent what the sentece was so you could understand better the content. I hope that, in the pass of the time this problem will come to an end because if not, it become a bigger problem and that is not the idea!
Congratulation for the video, IT WAS VERY GOOD!
Lucila M
ALE
This video really impacted me!!, it showed all the nesesarities of water that we need, and I also thinks that these teaches you very well how to make our own viedo of internet.
it was really intresting!!
LUIS
Hi there!
The video was really impressing! It made me think a lot. WE SHOULD REALLY USE LESS WATER!!! The part that really shocked me was that every 15 seconds someone dies from water diseases. I really didn´t know that. We had already seen a video on water with Marcela and I think that the two are very showing. It is really sad that many people don´t have access to clean water. When we use a lot of water without sense we have to think of this people. I think that the video really deserved the first price. I hope many people can see it, so that we all start changing our ways of using water.
I really liked the technical part of the video. It gave me some ideas for our video of internet. I really liked the DID YOU KNOW? and then NOW YOU KNOW. It was really creative.
See you,
Barbie M
Miss ale,
I think this video is great. I really shows what shortages of water is and what alarmed the world is or has to be. I feel really sorry for all those children that die because of problems because of the water. I think that from this day on I will try to use less water so I can posibly save lifes!!!
see you ,,
pili.m.
Miss Ale
That video shocked me a lot! I didnt want to keep on watching it. Though it really tells you that you have to be careful with water. Everybody needs to take care of water. It is like sacred. It is incredible that every 15 seconds a child dies of thirst. This video really should shock you (at least) a bit. It cant get in my mind that the world is a "thirsty world" and that we have the huge problem with water. I think it is really unfair that some inocent people or children have to suffer the concequences of not having water!!!.
Now back to the video...
I didnt understand what the video has to do with internet though....
see you tomorrow
sofi k
Miss Ale:
I feel this video is a great idea to learn how to prepare our video. Bad luck I sae the video very late because we already started the video. This is not only for the viedo, this is helping people waste less water that we waste all the days in the year!! You see that the map that is somewhere in the blog saying us how many people see this blog they can see not to waste water!! Well the point is I really think that this video will help me in internet video!!
Ines G.
Dear Miss Ale: IT WAS A FANTASTIC VIDEO IN A VERY IMPORTANT AND RELEVANT SUBJECT!!!!!!!!
I tink that this video is really great because it shows in a very distinguished way, wich are the main ideas of thirst and of the different meanings that thirst may have. For example, we can have thirst, and drink water, but when we drink water there is some other things that count, like, for example, if the water is pure or potable enough for people to drink because it will be the result of a better world. There is also another tipe of thirst wich is the world thirst, that means, that there are some zones that there are big shortages of water and it has been the result of the need to move people away from specific countyies, and that isn´t the idea, because there is an action wich occasioned all of this, and that is, the human beeing, we are so lazy when brushing our teeth that we don´t even want to turn out the water, and when doing so, there is lot´s of water that wasn´t needed at that specific moment that we used adn that is one of the simplests resasons why there is such a shorage of water, although, I am not saying that this is the only main reason for this such big and relevant problem, for exampel when we take a bath, we spent lots and lots of time on the bath with the water on in a very hot day, and we don´t think about how many billions of people and animals can be dyeing because of our selfishnes and that is something we should ALL work to correct because we are ending with the most important things in life, and not only for the people who are on the other side of the wall, but also for ourselfs and for all the people we love and care for.
Also, I think it was a really interesting video because of the way it showed you every single aspect of what he was saying and each image had it´s specific way of transmiting the message to the reader, I put foward the argument that the video had very short and relevant sentences that were very showing and that was a very good example for us because we had been learning some months ago what two tipes of sentences we can find, and this is a very good example for that topic and for the topic we are learing, that is, esseys and our writing skills, and it even gives us a very very good idea and model to follow when doing our video on the esseys of the negative and positive aspects of Internet. So this are some of the main reasons why I sujest that it will be a very good idea to show it to all year six so that we can all get a very cleare idea of how to work on our video esseys...
MISS ALE THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR HELP AND FOR SHOWING US THIS WONDERFUL VIDEO!!!!!!!
HOPE ALL MY FRIENDS ENJOY IT AS MUCH AS I DID!!!!!!!
THANK´S ONCE AGIAN!!!!!
BYE BYE...
SEE YOU SOON...
CAMI W
MISS ALE: I LOVED THIS VIDEO ! IT IS VERY RIGHT, AND IT IS SO ATTRACTING THAT I COULDNT STOP READING IT ! IT WAS VERY INTERESTING. IT IS ABSOLUTLEY RIGHT ON WHAT IT IS SAYING. BUT THATS NOT THE POINT , MY POINT IS THAT IT WAS VERY CREATIVE AND IT HOOKED MY ATTENTION A LOT ! IT HAS A LOT OF IDEAS WE CAN TAKE OUT FROM IT AND IT WAS AN EXCELENT, NO DOUBT IT WON THE FIRST PRIZE !!! IT IS SO GOOD WE CAN LEARN FROM THINGS THAT ARE DONE, NOT ONLY BY OUR TEACHERS AND FRIENDS !!! THE MEANING HE WANTED TO TRANSMIT WAS SO CLEAR, YOU COULD CLEARLY NOTICE IT WAS TO HELP THE WORLD AND NOT USE TOO MUCH WATER, BUT, THE POINT IS THAT IT WAS GOOD YOU COULD UNDERSTAND IT AND THAT HE COULD MARK HIS POINT, AND TRANSMIT IT SO CLEARLY TO ALL HIS READERS. CONGRATULATIONS TO THE PERSON THAT MADE IT , HE MUST HAVE BEEN VERY SMART !!!
SORRY MISS ALE, I FORGOT TO PUT MY NAME. THE LAST COMMENT WAS MINE, OLI G. 6C
SEE YOU ON MONDAY !
OLI
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