tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post7440276797637673528..comments2023-06-15T10:57:20.598-03:00Comments on Creative Readers, Writers and Thinkers: Expanding sentencesMiss Alehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15119085372336076640noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-61721094022422450512011-05-18T18:43:40.779-03:002011-05-18T18:43:40.779-03:00Hi miss Ale!!!!
I couldnt understand the game of c...Hi miss Ale!!!!<br />I couldnt understand the game of cliking the words. But I could anderstand that you have to click the words that are shaded. I think the same of gabor, I was sorprendid how the words was expandedjuan bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-73783982385387615862011-05-17T18:57:29.881-03:002011-05-17T18:57:29.881-03:00Miss Ale I don't know whay I can't see tha...Miss Ale I don't know whay I can't see that video but from what I had read it is very good<br /> BENJA.LAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-84556640880475081412011-05-17T12:05:31.661-03:002011-05-17T12:05:31.661-03:00Hello Miss Ale
What a great site. The showing sen...Hello Miss Ale <br />What a great site. The showing sentences are much better because they creat you a image in your mind, they make you think, the atrap the readers atention, and they are much more descriptive instead the telling sentences go straight to the point and you do not have the nececesary information to uderstand the story, paragraph, text etc.<br />This site is very good I don't have a lot of fasiliti for writing showing sentences but if I use similes it would be much easy.<br />See you tomorrow<br />Clara V 6AClara Vnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-21550147084647542692011-05-17T11:46:12.893-03:002011-05-17T11:46:12.893-03:00Miss Ale
The site is fantastic I coudnt belive how...Miss Ale<br />The site is fantastic I coudnt belive how one or two sentences come to be almost a book!<br />It was fantastic the method with the shading words I learnt much more and I would use this method to write our showing paragraph<br />Thank you.<br />Ernestina P.Ernestina P.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-46398422943282899282011-05-16T22:35:19.164-03:002011-05-16T22:35:19.164-03:00I would say that was the greatest prolongation of ...I would say that was the greatest prolongation of a text I had ever seen. It was great i looked up untill the end and it was almost a whole page just to explain that you had a cup of tea. GreatConradoMFnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-63632075613616726742011-05-16T19:42:07.889-03:002011-05-16T19:42:07.889-03:00Hi Miss Ale
WOW!!! The way you can turn a telling ...Hi Miss Ale<br />WOW!!! The way you can turn a telling sentence into a showing sentence, or paragraph is incredible.<br />If I did a telling sentence, this man could create it a book.<br />PaulinaPaulina Bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-7046978666021166842011-05-16T19:00:39.775-03:002011-05-16T19:00:39.775-03:00Its really incredible that in a little sentence we...Its really incredible that in a little sentence we can add words and make it so descriptive and long.<br /><br />See you tomorrow!Pedro.Anoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-21750400137136199022011-05-16T18:34:50.385-03:002011-05-16T18:34:50.385-03:00Hi Miss Ale,
Wooooooooooow
I clicked on the shaded...Hi Miss Ale,<br />Wooooooooooow<br />I clicked on the shaded words unti it became a hole pragraph. That was AMAZING.Now i know that you can turn 3 words into maybe 50.<br />Thank you Miss Ale,<br />See you tomorow!!!Tomas .Gnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-86625499676823800542011-05-15T19:07:39.927-03:002011-05-15T19:07:39.927-03:00MissMissAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-79942013090284675812011-05-15T19:06:51.256-03:002011-05-15T19:06:51.256-03:00Hello Miss Ale
Like franco I clich on the shaded w...Hello Miss Ale<br />Like franco I clich on the shaded word and I saw the sentence, it was very good write, and I can imagen the sentence.<br />nacho.bNacho Bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-78622054353355262022011-05-15T18:55:53.381-03:002011-05-15T18:55:53.381-03:00it is marvelous that from i made a tea to a very d...it is marvelous that from i made a tea to a very descriptive and full explanation of how he made tea. I like it very much.andy enoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-56944179552994742472011-05-15T15:23:56.460-03:002011-05-15T15:23:56.460-03:00Hello Miss Ale:
Like Gabor and Ari said I could c...Hello Miss Ale:<br /><br />Like Gabor and Ari said I could click on the shaded words. I could see how the sentences got longer. I prefere the sentences that was expanded. It describes much more!!Sofi Knoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-34068762660368616752011-05-14T22:33:44.239-03:002011-05-14T22:33:44.239-03:00Hello Miss Ale,
Wow I will never had imagine that ...Hello Miss Ale,<br />Wow I will never had imagine that a sentence could expand this way, in so much ways!!! <br />Now when I write a story I will know more much things<br />See us,<br />EugeEugenia F.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-14084843774976279262011-05-14T20:43:35.616-03:002011-05-14T20:43:35.616-03:00Hi miss Ale:
I couldnt see the site because when I...Hi miss Ale:<br />I couldnt see the site because when I clict on site it sayd me somethig that I couldt do it.<br />I woul try at school.Belen Dnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-25032115875132384292011-05-14T19:06:05.741-03:002011-05-14T19:06:05.741-03:00Hi Miss Ale
I could click in shaded words.When the...Hi Miss Ale<br />I could click in shaded words.When the words appeard it was fantastic!I clicked for a long time I really didnĀ“t know when it was going to end.Then at the end when there were no more shaded words I read the whole paragraph and it was very good!<br />See you tomorrow!<br />Clara GClara Gnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-5152709096785942982011-05-13T18:29:39.433-03:002011-05-13T18:29:39.433-03:00Hi Miss Ale,
Like Gabor said, I could also click ...Hi Miss Ale, <br />Like Gabor said, I could also click on the shaded words and every time I did like 5 more shaded words appeared!! It was so cool that you started out by one sentence and then like 20 lines of a showing paragraph. At first I thought that it would be a short showing paragraph and once I kept clicking I did not know when it was going to end. At the end when there were no more shaded words, I read the whole paragraph and it was much better than what it started out to be. The bad thing is that there is only one story. See you on Monday!!Ariana G.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-14204739016249317552011-05-11T18:26:24.495-03:002011-05-11T18:26:24.495-03:00hi miss ale.Unlike Franco i could click on the sha...hi miss ale.Unlike Franco i could click on the shaded words.i saw how the sentence expanded, it is fabulous.I liked the sentence much more when it was long. I never write like that because if every sentence i make grows so much then instead of a short story i would have a trillion bibles!gabor.gnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7978797054334467697.post-71158073723356363702011-05-11T18:06:26.791-03:002011-05-11T18:06:26.791-03:00Hello Miss Ale:
I couldnt do the thing of clickin...Hello Miss Ale:<br /><br />I couldnt do the thing of clicking on the shaded words until there are no more shaded words, because I clicked on one word and it said me to install some program. The video that was there was very good that man is kind of crazy because he cant cut off and breaks the phone cuts the little rope and the ending is also very good. The video was very well made and funny. The photo that was there and what it said upside the photo.<br /><br />See you tomorow.Franco Snoreply@blogger.com